An extensive critique with editing, alternate writing suggestions, overall feedback, and another pair of eyes might be just what you need to get a feeling for how your writing is working on the page. Getting ready for a submission? Contest entry? Or just want in-depth feedback so you know how you're doing? This may be just what you need, without as much financial commitment. In addition to your sample page(s) returned with comments, you’ll receive at least a page (500 words minimum) critique with my ideas for making your prose more powerful, precise, and pretty. (Like my alliteration? :)